So sánh hai bài viết Ielts Writing band 6 và band 8

Nhìn mặt bằng chung, có rất nhiều thí sinh IELTS Việt Nam không vượt qua band 6.5 Writing và nó luôn là một sự cản trở không nhỏ cho band điểm Overall. Vậy một bài IELTS Writing band 6 với một bài band 8 khác nhau như thế nào? Trong bài viết này, Jaxtina sẽ đưa ra 2 bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 thuộc 2 band điểm này để giúp bạn có hình dung chung nhất về sự khác biệt giữa hai band điểm này khi luyện thi IELTS nhé.

Tiêu chí

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Phân tích

Giờ bạn cùng Jaxtina vào phân tích hai bài IELTS Writing band 6 và 8 để xem sự khác biệt nhé!

Topic: Even though Globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative sides should not be forgotten. Discuss. (Chủ đề: Mặc dù sự toàn cầu hóa có tác động đến nền kinh tế thế giới theo một cách rất tích cực, nhưng nó vẫn có mặt tiêu cực. Bàn luận về vấn đề trên.)

Sample essay 1: Band 6

(1) Everything has two sides in the world, and so has the process of globalization too. The effects of globalization on the world economy are diverted.

(2) We must acknowledge that the negative effects are from a different kind than the positive ones. Therefor the negative sides, like low payment in less developed countries are important to conciderate.

(3) If we take the Eurozone for example, the economic changes according to the gloablisation process are huge. Many companies have transferred their factories into cheaper production earies to compeat in the world market. The results are rising unemployment rates in the “old industrial countries”.

(4) In regard to the other countries on the world market, such as China, this job transfer is a big opportunity. But no one can deny that the consequences for the less developed countries where economy flourished, based on availability of cheap employees, are highly important: globalization based on these facts brings environmental problems.

(5) Nevertheless, there are also posive reasons for globlaistaional effects. In general, it is remarkable that there is a new tendency in “Thinking Global”. For instance, people are willing to learn more languages and get educated about other cultures. Countries fromaly known as undeveloped, such as India, are getting chances to be the main leader in a certain field.

(6) All in all it can be said that the effects of globalization are enormous. The understanding of economic processes has changed completely. It is important to think in bigger terms, not just about the owen country. The positive things that this globalization process has brought must sensible us to the negative sides. The all over aim should be a world in balance, but this has yet to come.

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Sample essay 2: Band 8

(1) Globalization is such a commonly used term in the twentieth-first century. It simply means that the world has become integrated economically, socially, politically and culturally through the advances of technology, transportation and communication. It is undeniable that globalization has resulted in both positive and negative effects which must be addressed accordingly.

(2) To begin with, globalization has contributed to the world’s economies in many beneficial ways. The advances in science and technology have allowed businesses to easily cross over territorial boundary lines. Consequently, companies tend to become more productive and competitive thereby raising the quality of goods, services and the world’s living standard.

(3) Secondly, several companies from the more developed countries have already ventured to establish foreign operations or branches to take advantage of the low cost of labor in the poorer countries. This kind of business activity will provide more influx of cash or investment funds into the less developed countries.

(4) However, one cannot deny the negative effects which have derived from globalization. One crucial social aspect is the risk and danger of epidemic diseases which can easily be spread as transportation becomes easier and faster in today’s advanced society. This is evidenced in the recent bird flu disease which has infected most Asian countries over a short period of time.

(5) As large corporations invest or take over many offshore businesses, a modern form of colonization will also evolve which may pose certain power pressure on the local governments of the less developed countries. Unemployment rates in the more developed regions such as Europe may also escalate as corporations choose to outsource to the cheaper workforce from Asian countries.

(6) In conclusion, I like to reiterate that globalization is inevitable and we must urge individuals, companies and governments to use a more balanced approach by taking the appropriate steps to deal with matters relating to the financial or economical gains versus the social, political or ecological concerns of the world.

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